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Hi. I'm Dariel Raye, an interracial/multi-cultural paranormal romance, urban fantasy, and psy/suspense author, and every day of this journey is a learning experience. I'm also a counselor, musician, and animal lover. My stories are about all-conquering love and romance, and I enjoy hosting other authors as well. Enter a world where werewolves, vampires, multi-shifters, vamp-like Nephilim, Vodouin Fey, and all things paranormal capture our hearts...

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Friday, September 26, 2014

Dariel's Friday Flasher: "Confrontation"

Welcome back to Flasher Friday!! My friends and I have come together again to offer 100 words on the same pic, so make sure to click here and check theirs out, too :-)

Sadie. Always did wrap me in a fog.

“Why you standin’ in the doorway, Baby?”

Her voice slides along my spine and I come to attention, throbbing, heavy, belligerent.

A whisper of silk as she slithers out of that lace nighty.

She’s movin’ on the bed now, pullin’ covers back. J’adore and woman vaporize my mind and I feel her silky skin, her lips encircling me.

Sadie's husband Jim, my uncle, was cross the ranch taming that new stallion, but my body don’t give a damn.

“Just watchin’. Stay there.” I've gotta face him like a man.

“What you watchin?” She has no idea how deep I've fallen.

“Jim’s comin’ down towards the house.” I imagine blood’ll clear this fog. 


Muffy Wilson said...

Guess a quick cowboy poke is out of the question. At first I thought you mixed your pronouns then caught where you were going. Very clever. Yeppers, he isn't going to lose his cowpokin' job over a cowboy poke. Very clever. co

Kimberly Gould said...

Interesting scenario. great bait and switch on the POV.

Julez S Morbius said...

really cleverly written flash

Dariel Raye said...

Had to clarify with a few more words. I could tell peeps were getting the wrong idea about my hero :-)

Anonymous said...

Another great take on this picture :-)

Naomi said...

Love your take on the pic. Great flash

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

Loved how you worded this. Very western and that southern twang. Great take, I hope not too much blood will be spilled. And that the husband doesn't go killing him too. Awesome flash.

Dariel Raye said...

Thanks for the support :-) Rolling Muse in the Roses, I think he's ready for whatever comes next ;-)