Dariel's Friday Flasher: "Confrontation"

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Sadie. Always did wrap me in a fog.

“Why you standin’ in the doorway, Baby?”

Her voice slides along my spine and I come to attention, throbbing, heavy, belligerent.

A whisper of silk as she slithers out of that lace nighty.

She’s movin’ on the bed now, pullin’ covers back. J’adore and woman vaporize my mind and I feel her silky skin, her lips encircling me.

Sadie's husband Jim, my uncle, was cross the ranch taming that new stallion, but my body don’t give a damn.

“Just watchin’. Stay there.” I've gotta face him like a man.

“What you watchin?” She has no idea how deep I've fallen.

“Jim’s comin’ down towards the house.” I imagine blood’ll clear this fog. 


Muffy Wilson said…
Guess a quick cowboy poke is out of the question. At first I thought you mixed your pronouns then caught where you were going. Very clever. Yeppers, he isn't going to lose his cowpokin' job over a cowboy poke. Very clever. co
Kimberly Gould said…
Interesting scenario. great bait and switch on the POV.
Julez S Morbius said…
really cleverly written flash
Dariel Raye said…
Had to clarify with a few more words. I could tell peeps were getting the wrong idea about my hero :-)
Anonymous said…
Another great take on this picture :-)
Naomi said…
Love your take on the pic. Great flash
Loved how you worded this. Very western and that southern twang. Great take, I hope not too much blood will be spilled. And that the husband doesn't go killing him too. Awesome flash.
Dariel Raye said…
Thanks for the support :-) Rolling Muse in the Roses, I think he's ready for whatever comes next ;-)