Dariel's World

Hi. I'm Dariel Raye, an interracial/multi-cultural paranormal romance, urban fantasy, and psy/suspense author, and every day of this journey is a learning experience. I'm also a counselor, musician, and animal lover. My stories are about all-conquering love and romance, and I enjoy hosting other authors as well. Enter a world where werewolves, vampires, multi-shifters, vamp-like Nephilim, Vodouin Fey, and all things paranormal capture our hearts...

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Friday, August 29, 2014

Dariel's Flasher Fiction Friday Stop: "Afterthoughts"


Hey, Everybody! Finally trying to make a comeback from my unexpectedly lengthy health issues, and happily rejoining my friends at Flasher Friday Fiction!

Every Friday, we all use a pic lovingly chosen by our majestic leaders and use this pic as our prompt to write 100 words - no more, no less. After you take a look at this one, click here to take a peek at my friends' posts, too. Unlike my heroine this week, you won't be disappointed. LOL Oh, and we LOVE comments. Here's the pic and my take on it...


Afterthoughts
We met at a cast party. Such a great dancer, our bodies gyrating in tandem, and he’s fuckin’ hot to look at, but now…

“You okay?” His voice is strained. What? Really?

Collecting myself. “Um, yeah. Fine.”

Hell no! I’m not ‘okay!’ I’m disappointed, disillusioned, still horny as hell. I can’t believe I wore my rockin’ gold mini just to end up pummeled, pawed, uncomfortable, and dissatisfied.

Why do I still have these damned uncomfortable heels on, anyway? His idea of sexy.

“Sure you’re okay?” He peeps at me from between my legs, a wounded puppy.


“Sure. That was…great.”

7 comments:

Julez S Morbius said...

Excellently written flash capturing the look on the woman's face perfectly

Naomi said...

Love your flash. Great take on the pic

Raven McAllan said...

humeros and sexy, a perfect combination. Love it.

Doris O'connor said...

Oh, you caught that just great! lol Loved it.

Muffy Wilson said...

If I had a penny for every time I said that....very cute, so dead on perfect for this photo. Humorous and perfect. What a great combination!! Welcome back! We missed you!

Dariel Raye said...

I missed you all, too! Happy to be back. Thanks for the encouragement. You peeps are awesome :-D

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

Loved your take on the flash. Awesome job!