Dariel's World

Hi. I'm Dariel Raye, an interracial/multi-cultural paranormal romance, urban fantasy, and action suspense author, and every day of this journey is a learning experience. I'm also a counselor, musician, and animal lover. My stories are about all-conquering love and romance, and I enjoy hosting other authors as well. Enter a world where werewolves, vampires, multi-shifters, vamp-like Nephilim, Vodouin Fey, and all things paranormal capture our hearts...

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Friday, March 14, 2014

Dariel's Friday Flash: "Whipped"

Friday flash time! Every Friday, our fearless leaders choose a pic and we all write 100 words using the pic as inspiration. After you've read "Whipped," visit my friends' sites for more! We love to hear from you, so please feel free to comment. Here's the pic for this week's flashes. Enjoy!



Whipped
The sweetest dreams come with a price. People say David’s too controlling, you know the drill, and maybe choosing my wedding gown seemed a bit much, but little do they know. Wonderful hands undress me, caressing...

just the way I taught him.

Stretching, I snuggle up, still tingling with power from our wedding night. David rumbles against my back, obviously ready for action again.

“I can’t believe you’re finally mine,” he croons.


I close my eyes and smile, grateful for the respite. No, actually you’re mine, I think to myself. Succubus life is hell, and I needed a vacation.

8 comments:

Michaela Rhua said...

Love the way she is in control but in a subtle way. Great flash.

Faberge Nostromo said...

Nice twist!

Decadent Kane said...

awesome creative flash. LOL I adore the way she let's him think he's in control. LOL

Dariel Raye said...

Thanks for the encouragement! Beautiful inspiration pic :-)

Muffy Wilson said...

Yes, I agree at how clever and subtle she is to let him think he has the reign. She is a wicked little one to have and to hold. Very nicely done, Dariel. I particularly loved this photo as it came from one of my collection. So evocative. Loved your take :) xo

Doris O'connor said...

Oh, I love the twist! Great flash :-)

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

Great twist at the end, and ohhh a succubus too. Nice flash!

Dariel Raye said...

Thanks, Rolling Muse! I take it you like succubus heroines, too ;-)