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Hi. I'm Dariel Raye, an interracial/multi-cultural paranormal romance, urban fantasy, and psy/suspense author, and every day of this journey is a learning experience. I'm also a counselor, musician, and animal lover. My stories are about all-conquering love and romance, and I enjoy hosting other authors as well. Enter a world where werewolves, vampires, multi-shifters, vamp-like Nephilim, Vodouin Fey, and all things paranormal capture our hearts...

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Friday, January 10, 2014

Dariel's Friday Flash: "Gateway"

Gateway
Rush hour. Even worse now than it’ll be this evening. I swerve, dumbstruck, a near miss for the car behind me. It can’t be! He’s…he’s…
Pull it together, girl. I manage to pull over despite the hissing and screaming. My knees are rubberbands, every hair on my body electrified, muscles clenching, imaginary tazers beelining for my clit. How?
“Gateway?”
He smiles, knowingly. Well, more of a smirk, the same cold eyes, and slides the heavy chain around his hunky shoulders.
I can hardly walk, my body quivering, pulsing, threatening to explode. “Answer me, dammit! Gateway?”

He narrows his eyes. “Of course.”

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13 comments:

Muffy Wilson said...

WoW, that was really electrically charged, Dariel. I am curious to know what "Gateway" is and how this ends. What a superb cliffhanger <3 xo

wildfire8470 said...

Exactly what Muffy said. Perhaps this is a small flash from a bigger story? I want to know the bigger story or urge you to write it!

S.J. Maylee said...

You had me transfixed. The tension her was fabulous too. Super flash.

Decadent Kane said...

Very well done- you built great tension and I'm hoping this goes to a larger piece.
~Decadent

Michelle Howard said...

Wow, I want to know what gateway is

Raven McAllan said...

Just please write some more... I'm hooked

Pablo Michaels said...

I too want to know what Gateway is or should I ask who? I see the depiction on his face of that smirk. Excellently paced.

Pablo Michaels said...

I too want to know what Gateway is or should I ask who? I see the depiction on his face of that smirk. Excellently paced.

Naomi said...

I'm dying to know what Gateway is. Love your descriptions

Jorja Lovett said...

Ooh, I'm intrigued...

Donna Reynolds said...

I loved it I'm not sure why but I posted a comment the other night from my phone but it didn't show up.

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

Made the hair on my arms stand up. Wow! Def intense flash. :) I want to know more. You left me hanging...and I want to know what happens with this Gateway. ;-) Awesome job.

Julez S Morbius said...

hot flash