tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post6204806121455122850..comments2023-11-23T17:11:54.858-06:00Comments on Musings of an Independent Artist: Dariel's Friday Flash Stop - "Forever Monsieur"Dariel Rayehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06636771393462118904noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-89531590718498156902014-10-27T22:27:25.634-05:002014-10-27T22:27:25.634-05:00Oh wow! This gave me shivers. I hope she is not tr...Oh wow! This gave me shivers. I hope she is not trapped but there of free will. Must know more of this short story. Great flash!Rolling Muse in The Roseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11584542480191015817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-7931535054310593632014-10-25T23:52:54.969-05:002014-10-25T23:52:54.969-05:00Thanks, Ray! Glad you liked it. Your description c...Thanks, Ray! Glad you liked it. Your description confirms a goal reached. Julez, happy or not at the moment, she wants to be with him. Dariel Rayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636771393462118904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-16955547576991878822014-10-25T23:50:15.644-05:002014-10-25T23:50:15.644-05:00Muffy, you're a wise woman! She does like him ...Muffy, you're a wise woman! She does like him a WHOLE helluva lot, and Doris, his intensity is one of the main things keeping her mesmerized :-)Dariel Rayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636771393462118904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-7356800051345535112014-10-25T23:47:08.519-05:002014-10-25T23:47:08.519-05:00Thanks, Naomi and Michaela! I'd like to write ...Thanks, Naomi and Michaela! I'd like to write more about these two as well. Dariel Rayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636771393462118904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-62005718426567411162014-10-25T23:41:54.661-05:002014-10-25T23:41:54.661-05:00Hey, Cora! I think I'm gonna play around with ...Hey, Cora! I think I'm gonna play around with this one a little more, too. Angelica, let's say a little of both. Long story behind these two ;-)Dariel Rayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636771393462118904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-62434030428403929922014-10-25T06:01:59.274-05:002014-10-25T06:01:59.274-05:00Powerful flash. Is she happy?Powerful flash. Is she happy?Julian Sponghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09116901320575396141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-89034471573883703352014-10-24T18:58:48.404-05:002014-10-24T18:58:48.404-05:00Damn, very dark and sensual. I was hooked from the...Damn, very dark and sensual. I was hooked from the start. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-80558497193416314422014-10-24T15:30:23.034-05:002014-10-24T15:30:23.034-05:00Oh my, he is certainly intense! :-)Oh my, he is certainly intense! :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-75050580063689796172014-10-24T15:28:37.153-05:002014-10-24T15:28:37.153-05:00Oh, I think she likes him a whole hellava lot. Wan...Oh, I think she likes him a whole hellava lot. Wanting to lean into him to stoke her burning fires. Yep, she digs him in a real big way, and wants to please him. But, it begs the question then - why the tears? And why provoke him by speaking French when she knows he doesn't like that? Yet, not lean into him. Very cleverly excised piece. You leave with more questions than answers. Fabulous Muffy Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00659495646622567840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-5920481907318606702014-10-24T14:59:52.828-05:002014-10-24T14:59:52.828-05:00Such harsh words from him. Would like more.Such harsh words from him. Would like more.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16447034496838544889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-12425800212106063512014-10-24T09:58:35.793-05:002014-10-24T09:58:35.793-05:00Wow! A flasher filled with fire, and full of excit...Wow! A flasher filled with fire, and full of excitement. I want more of the story. Love itNaomi Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16693171140434692340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-14370629431103113602014-10-24T08:20:10.024-05:002014-10-24T08:20:10.024-05:00I wonder if she is happy with Monsieur or trapped....I wonder if she is happy with Monsieur or trapped.Angelica Dawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06590063222683830585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-11070501181223860912014-10-24T05:53:07.369-05:002014-10-24T05:53:07.369-05:00I'm there.I'm there. Cora Bluhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744897714127654369noreply@blogger.com