tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post1248346575723447991..comments2023-11-23T17:11:54.858-06:00Comments on Musings of an Independent Artist: Dariel's Flash Friday Stop: "Captured"Dariel Rayehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06636771393462118904noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-65853694142675845632015-02-07T05:36:23.379-06:002015-02-07T05:36:23.379-06:00Fast moving, excellent flash. You conjure up an ex...Fast moving, excellent flash. You conjure up an exciting scene with great visuals and leave loads of questions. You need to continue this storyNaomi Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16693171140434692340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-72573281698668864732015-02-07T05:06:14.071-06:002015-02-07T05:06:14.071-06:00Thanks for you encouraging comments, Doris, Muffy,...Thanks for you encouraging comments, Doris, Muffy, Stella, and DK :-) So many stories can be told with this pic. This was a fun one :-)Dariel Rayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636771393462118904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-58975260251221330932015-02-07T04:36:07.836-06:002015-02-07T04:36:07.836-06:00Oh, intriguing. And now I have to google that way ...Oh, intriguing. And now I have to google that way of spelling vamphyre! Faberge's Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12782064660095493149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-61977266392585035412015-02-06T16:38:52.726-06:002015-02-06T16:38:52.726-06:00A very engaging excerpt, Dariel. Sounds smoking ho...A very engaging excerpt, Dariel. Sounds smoking hot. You're right about first person working for short stories. Thanks for sharing. Flirty & Feisty Romancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06509036740796798717noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-88515491687609332522015-02-06T11:54:12.139-06:002015-02-06T11:54:12.139-06:00Yes, writing first person is delicate, but submers...Yes, writing first person is delicate, but submersion is also hella exciting. And this was just that, very exciting. Loved it. xoMuffy Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00659495646622567840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-68490226360866101892015-02-06T05:11:22.049-06:002015-02-06T05:11:22.049-06:00Oh I like. You need to expand this for sure, Darie...Oh I like. You need to expand this for sure, Dariel :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-3996489369471368802015-02-06T04:04:02.620-06:002015-02-06T04:04:02.620-06:00Thanks, Raven. This pic brought an entire story to...Thanks, Raven. This pic brought an entire story to mind :-) I know exactly what you mean about first person. Ironically, I used to find it a turn-off, too, but find I enjoy it especially when writing flashes and shorts. Puts me in the character's mind immediately.Dariel Rayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636771393462118904noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1970161095161166059.post-85140434844312930662015-02-06T02:46:43.122-06:002015-02-06T02:46:43.122-06:00Intriguing.
Personally, and this is a very persona...Intriguing.<br />Personally, and this is a very personal thing, I don't like reading first person.<br />However you have thrown up so many questions, I want to know more...Raven McAllanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09259780628536524891noreply@blogger.com